writing

Focuses for writing this week	Explanation in my own words.
Where do speech marks go
How to put in other punctuation
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
Different words for ‘said’	Asked, replied, responded, yelled, screamed, shouted, mumbled, said, muttered, gasped, panting, chuckled, thought, told, uttered, continued, whispered
Adding adverbs	Responded politely, asked politely, screamed angrily,

EXAMPLES

“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.

“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.

“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.

“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.

Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.

“Why do you want to go” mum replied.

“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.

“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.

Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.

MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.

“How was your day?” asked Michael.

“It was great, it was fun” replied Lopi.

“Let’s go do fruit Lopi.”

He nodded in reply.

How was your weekend said lopi?”.

It was great I went to my baby cousins birthday”

Replied lopi.

“When are you finished lopi?”.said Michael.

When i’m finished replied lopi.  

dialogue

Focuses for writing this week	Explanation in my own words.
How to use speech marks	You put them at the start before you start talking.
How to put in other punctuation	Put it in front of the speech mark the one on the end.
When to start a new line or when to keep writing	When 2 or more people are chatting
Different words for ‘said’	Asked,Respond,Replied
Adding adverbs	Replied with Excitement, Asked the teacher sad

MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.

“Do u like chickens?” asked stanley as he drank his tea .

“Yes I do I eat them” Responded Havea.

“No it’s not healthy for you” said  Keru as he ate a cake .

“Oh ok is vegetables healthy “ yelled stanley.

“Yes is that a stupid question” Havea said politely.

“Of Course it’s healthy” said Keru.

“Do you play Fortnite?” Havea Said.

“Change subject” As Stanley rolled his eyes.

“I play it on my ipad 2” replied keru.

“What is your username?” Stanley asked.

“Keruazap that’s my username” said keru.

“Mine is XxCortezzJadenxX” as Havea Drank tea.``

“Mine is STANFACE034”replied Stanley.

“Did u know that there is a new game it’s called battlelands” replied keru

“ That must be cool” Havea said with an Exciting Face

car crash

Brainstorm of ideas:

• Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, firefighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
• See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
• smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING	PROBLEM	SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,	Car crash	A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see	injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts	Firefighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone	Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.	Fire extinguisher, put sawdust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.

Title:	How did the car crash
Intro 2 sentences	He was 24 years old and his name was ricky. And he was going home to his chigenand his wife there names where tk & Anthony & AORAH.
Orientation 5-10 sentences WHEN WHO WHAT WHERE WHY HOW CHARACTERS	Before he cast his gas was leaking and his inger cast on fiery before his Car  cast on fier he was coming around the corner Of the mantin and when his car cast on fier it was 12  0 clock and he was jagc .
Problem 5-10 sentences	His car cast on fire when he was coming around the corner.
Solution 5-10 sentences	He could jump out of the car so he want die.
Conclusion Less than 5 sentences	When ricky died his famaly was sadand then all of  his famaly went to the tanny.

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