Brainstorm of ideas:
- Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, firefighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
- See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen, stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
- smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking
PEOPLE/SETTING
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PROBLEM
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SOLUTION
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Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
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Car crash
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A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
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No glasses so couldn’t see
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injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
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Firefighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
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On the phone
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Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
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Fire extinguisher, put sawdust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
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Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.
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Title:
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How did the car crash
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Intro
2 sentences
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He was 24 years old and his name was ricky. And he was going home to his chigenand his wife there names where tk & Anthony & AORAH.
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Orientation 5-10 sentences
WHEN
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHY
HOW
CHARACTERS
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Before he cast his gas was leaking and his inger cast on fiery before his
Car cast on fier he was coming around the corner
Of the mantin and when his car cast on fier it was 12 0 clock and he was jagc .
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Problem
5-10 sentences
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His car cast on fire when he was coming around the corner.
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Solution
5-10 sentences
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He could jump out of the car so he want die.
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Conclusion
Less than 5 sentences
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When ricky died his famaly was sadand then all of his famaly went to the tanny.
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TERELL,s STOER
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