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On Monday 24th September 2018 Room 7 did a blindfold challenge. We wanted to have fun and make our morning a bit interesting by playing a game.

Firstly Miss Ashley told us the rules which was “no touching the tables or pieces of paper on the floor or you will lose points.“  However you are allowed to touch the chairs because you sometimes have to step over them to get to the end. Next we got into buddies. My buddy was Lucina.  We had to line up by the heater in our buddies.

First it was my turn to go so Lucina (my buddy)  put the blindfold on me (over my eyes) and helped me to stand up. The blindfold was tight it felt like a constrictor boa on my face. I felt so confused and disorientated because the blindfold was covering my eyes. Lucina told me to “go left, right, straight and step over.” I was feeling nervous and a little bit scared because “what if she was tricking me?“ and I was really doing something silly. I got to the end safely and took my blindfold off.

Next it was my buddies turn so I helped her put the blindfold on. I told her to walk straight first, then next turn left. She doesn’t know her lefts and rights so she went the wrong way.I said “no your other left” and it was a little bit funny. In the end we got to the blue fruit tray and we made it without losing any points!

I think I would like to do this activity again because it was cool to do something different and fun in class especially since it’s the end of the term and I think we are all feeling kind of tired.

On monday the 24th of September 2018 I did not go to school because I was sick because when I wok up

I sick up and it went flying across the room nd land  on the wall and when my mum told me that I had to say home today because I was sick then my mum said I had to say in bied

And then I say in bied and then I fall a sleep on my bed and then after that I wake  up and

I ask my mum to ciek the time  and was 12 o'clock and I sleep for 3 hours and I had

Same food and for my lunch I had chicken soup  and then I sick up agne but insird I sick

Up in the backit

And then I went back to sleep  and then wake up and then ciek the time and it was  3 o'clock

And school was finish and then my brother finsh his cind

INTRO -

WHAT: Blindfold challenge.

WHERE: room 7

WHY: For fun

WHEN: Friday 21st September 2018, 9.10am

HOW: got into buddies, Miss Ashley arranged the furniture

WHO: Room 7 students

PARAGRAPH 1:

• Get in buddies
• Miss Ashley gave instructions and rules - points.
• In your head, made a plan of which way to go
• Say who your buddy was.

PARAGRAPH 2: WHEN YOU WERE BLINDFOLDED

• Feelings: paralysed, nervous, scared, excited, sleepy, felt comfortable because I had done it before, trust my buddy??? Felt like i was going the wrong. Felt like a robot.
• How did it feel to have a blindfold on?
• Happened: lost points because we touched the paper/tables, fell over,
• Banged into each other.
• Table pushed me to the side
• Furniture was like spikes in Fortnite.
• Screaming like it was a justin bieber concert
• Kaboom
• “ahhh”

PARAGRAPH 3: WHEN YOU WERE TELLING YOUR BUDDY WHERE TO GO

• Tell them to “go straight, go left and right, go on the chair and jump on it, crawl, climb over, duck, stop stop stop, lean over, reach out, grab the chair, step over, confirm or deny”
• Felt like the general of an army, an army of one.
• Felt like: excited, angry, nervous, strong, fearless, in control,

CONCLUSION: (Choose one of these)

• My favourite was..
• I falt ..
• It was easy/hard because..
• I would or wouldn’t do this again because...

WRITE YOUR STORY HERE.

On the 21st of september 2018 at Tamaki primary in the morning at 9.00 in room

7. Miss ashley’ told room 7  that we were going to play the game could

Blindfold  because it is funny and she told as to get a parnar  and walk by the

Hitler And then she gave as a blindfold . and then she said the pesen that was  at the back of there parnr to put the blindfold on their partner in front of you and

Ask If it was to tight or if it was to laws and then miss ashley sit up the mini

 Maz .

The first thing room 7 did after miss ashley sit it up and then miss ashley’ tod as

That we Got to go one at a time and me and my partner. sat down kilitli and watdid  for our tuner and suddenly it was our and then I told my partner to git

Up  and then I guide my partner keru  forw the mini maz and then he had to tech the dord .

Then after my partner tuner it was my tuner and then my partner’told me to git up and then I got up and then told me to walk right and then straight  and then call under the talbuill and then he told me to git up And walk right and then straight and tach the dord .

 

And then room 7 had some firt and then miss ashley told room 7 what

To do next but before that we took of blindfold.

My favourite was everything  but my ver favourite part was when I had my tun.

• I felt excited and happy.

• It was easy/hard because I felt sayf doing it with my partner keru.

I would or wouldn’t do this again because I would do it again because

It was funny and I was excited .

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A tsunami is really bad because they can destroy a city if a tsunami happened you must all run if a tsunami happens far away you can run to the highest point of a mountain and it will shrink which means it will go down so when it gets there it won't be that high he'll be a little bit high. 

   

By kordell

Tsunamis

A tsunami can kill you because again cars and knock you out and then you will die under the water because the tsunami can make a flood and then .if you run to the highest crime like a mountain you won't because the wave would be not be able to see who you are so high.

By  Terell